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Q. In many countries , a prison sentence is considered as the best way to decrease crime . however , education is often argued as more effective way .
* Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Vocabulary :
Prison : Cages , lockup , Confine , Imprison , Jail
Government : Regime , Council , authority , administration , executive , directorate
Crime : Offend , felony , offence , misdeeds
Education : literacy , Knowledge
Criminals : Offenders , culprits , delinquent
Reduce : Drop , decline , plunge
Rehabilitation : a centre which guide for right path
NOW INTRODUCTION
Every nation has a rigid legislation to curb the misdeed . Today , numerous nation , put the individuals behind lockup considering an effective way to reduce felony but other say that providing fundamental knowledge is a better way . I will discuss both the view with my opinion in the impending paragraph .
BP: 1
* By giving imprisonment as a punishment to the culprits .
* Set an example to the whole society .
* As, it affects severly the person's life as well as their family members .
* During the period of punishment masses go through various hardships such as staying away from loved ones and negative profile record among society .
Consequently , it makes individuals beaware of this .
Example : Survey by C. B.T .
BP 2
Literacy tool help to plunge the crime
Education is a virtue which provide plethora of opportunities to get better jobs and fulfill their basic requirements such as accommodation , food .
It is also describes the individuals about the harmful impact of crime on their life .
CONCLUSION :
Imprisonment and education works effectively to drop the rate of crime in a country . Moreover , rehabilitation centers also help to reduce offence .
BY : Kiranpreet kaur virk
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